It’s in the way she moves,
Softly, firmly, quietly,
Like she doesn’t wish to be spotted.
Slipping through cracks,
And disappearing into the crowd.
It’s in the way she laughs,
So ordinary, so familiar,
Yet a contradiction to her eyes.
Her eyes, so profound-
Seemingly an abysmal nothingness,
Yet containing everything.
Everything that needs to be known about her.
(Daily Prompt: Flattery Radical Authenticity )
You conveyed the restraint of her unraveling emotions simply through body language. I looked into WP after two weeks and yours is the first blog I hit up. Because… this is what I was looking for.
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Oh wow, this is one of the best compliments ever. Thanks so much Prajakta. I was thinking where you were, missed you around. Hope you are well ❤️
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Beautiful. This reminds me of all the women I fell In love with over the last few years. I crush hard.lol Thanks for liking my post.
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lol nothing wrong with crushing hard. As long as it doesn’t break you more than it mends you. Thanks a lot for reading this Vinny and leaving a comment as well🙂
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Youre welcome. Thanks for replying and liking my latest post.
I agree. Crushing is the best, as long as you dont ruin your self esteem.
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Oh it was a pleasure! And very well said, nothing’s worth losing your self esteem 🙂
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Thank you. I try to speak with purpose. Its a far cry from how I use to be.
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I guess that’s what life does to us, it’s slowly shapes us into better version of ourselves with the adversities it throws our way. It depends on us how we let it effect us. I too have changed a thousand folds from the kind of person I used to be 🙂
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I agree. Well said. 😀
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Thanks Vinny. It was nice connecting with you 🙂
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Thanks Zee. Ditto
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Absolutely ! 🙂
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Beautiful journey through thoughts and feelings Zee. I love how the last verse paints the mystery of the lady’s eyes. Perfect mystery and great authentic contrasts. Winner !
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Wow, you are too kind. I’m humbled by your praise. Thank you so much Lita for reading ! Your visits always make me smile🙂
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I really like your poetry and your writing! I just followed; Ilook forward to interacting with you on WordPress!
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Hi Pamela, thank you so much for dropping by and following my blog. I’ll visit yours soon! Can’t wait to connect more 💞
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Zee – your poem is really good – feel cheesy saying that – but those are the words that came to my mind — I like the direct narrative – the eyes talk and all – but there is a beauty to be found between lines and thru the vibe of your poem -‘a human beauty with a bit of private joy…. hmm
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This is such a wonderful comment Y, I love the way you put it! It’s not cheesy at all. It’s makes me so happy to hear from others what they think about my writings and how they interpreted it. Thanks a lot for sharing with me your thoughts. Hope you have a lovely weekend 😁☺️
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😉
💕
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❤
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🌹✌🏼️
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I could see myself in those words quite often. 😉
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I hope that’s a good thing😉 thanks Rommel 🙂
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it must be true. the eyes are the window to the soul.
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Yes it’s true, I believe so they are!☺️
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This is beautiful zee 🙂 A certain level of enigma makes a women more beautiful and intriguing 🙂 This reminded me of Black Swan movie 🙂
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Wow that’s a great compliment. Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment 💝
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🙂 Pleasure is all mine darling ❤
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Awh so sweet of you! ❤ 🙂
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Remind me of the movie, ‘the fault of our stars’….
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Thank you for the compliment☺️
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HI Zee.. now..
eYes say so much..
about a heARt..
a spiRit oF
EmoTioNs
liGht to dARk..
to heaRt liVing
to dying death
as life.. and truly
it’s hard to go through life..
with never having eYes to shine
to OtHers what the feeLinGS are iNside..
as sHades for me hid the hell and store the heaven
Now Away from Greater liGht to share with otHers
in real liFE
now away
from words..
and i suppose that
is why i dance and sing..
as i kNow longer have eYes
that show a Dance of Song
as i must wear shades noW..
iN ways oF LoVe…When
we can love..
it’s best to love..
for when we can’t
all tHere is is
hide
it seems
to me.. of eYes
no longer shine to spread…
trULy.. eYes do say a soUL..
Dance and SonG will never
replicate an eYe of Love..
full now..
but
sure
i can try..
i cry for Love..
with tears of Joy mY FriEnd..
in Dance and Song a gift too.. oF Love..
wiTh Hopes and Wishes for you mY friEnd for eYes oF Love..:)
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Such a wonderful way to share your experience, thank you Fred for taking time to share. Eyes say so much and so little at the same time. Depends who is looking and why. Hope you have a great weekend ! 🙂
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Thanks my FriEnd..
Zee.. whenever i see a
Notification that you
Have written something
New I can alWays count
On inSpiRaTioNs from
You.. thanks
As alWays
My friEnd
For all
Of what
Comes
From
Your
EYes
As PArt
Of God’s
Masterpiece
wHole as LiGht
And DArk and
‘Tween iN strokes
Of brush.. full canvas
We beinG hUman.. and
PArt oF God Painting now..:)
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Oh that is a wonderful compliment. Nothing makes me happier than to know that my writing can inspire others/ Thanks Fred 🙂
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Welcome.. FriEnd..:)
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Beautiful poem. The eyes do speak volumes, usually more than the mouth.
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Yes they surely do, for the ones who dare to look. Thanks Trent!😇☺️
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Very descriptive!
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Thank you Marissa ☺️
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Beautiful! and nice song
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Hey, Thanks a lot ☺️
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So beautiful, Zee! The eyes as the window to the soul 💖
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Oh, Yes they are ! Thanks so much for reading Erika ❤️
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I love your heartfelt writing. It always lead the reader to a depth not been before! You are doing amazing in that!
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Oh I’m beyond humbled Erika. Thank you for this compliment. I’m glad my writings reach the depth I want it to ☺️❤️
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It does, Zee! You are doing fantastic 💖
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Awh thanks Erika, you are lovely !😘
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😘😘
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Awesome
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Thank you 🙂
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https://charlypriest.wordpress.com/2016/10/10/she-looked-at-me-2/
You looked at me and you saw my soul
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I know, I have the perfect eyes to see through people :)))
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Your beautiful words remind me of an enigmatic song that I think that you’d enjoy.
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Wow, I’m humbled that my words reminded you of such a legendary classic song. I loved the lyrics. The tune kind of reminded me of “Hotel California” By The Eagles. Thanks for sharing Rob ❤
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