(WPC: Quest )
Let me crawl into you like a tunnel to an abandoned city.
I’ll walk down the deserted road to your heart,
with caution and measured steps.
I’ll explore the wilderness under your chest.
My footsteps echo in the empty auditorium of your rib cage,
Whispering stories of ruins and remains.
Those wild dandelions smell of cigarettes and smoke,
You are poison and beauty,
A realistic illusion to behold.
You are a little more darkness than light at the moment.
As I walk through your city of broken hearts,
Some pieces hang from the non existent sky,
While some lay scattered on the dirt path.
I step on few by mistake,
I see you wither in pain.
I apologize for the inconvenience I’ve caused,
But there is something so extraordinary,
About treading uncharted territories,
To explore places that have never been touched before.
Let me walk through forsaken forgotten relics of your soul.
I promise I’ll not leave you emptier like the ones that came before.
I’ll rebuild you from ashes,
I’ll show you how beautiful your ruins are.
I’ll graze my knees on your asphalt heart.
I’ll stand on the boulevard of your shattered dreams and lost hope,
To rebuild them from scratch.
I’ll caress your skin until you come back to life.
I’ll rebuild you from ashes,
now thats what im talking about, beautifully written. kudos 🙂
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Thanks a lot Akhiz. I’m glad you liked it 😉☺️😇
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I love your imagination and how beautiful you penned all emotions on paper. Yet again brilliant piece Zee. Love it. And truthfully, I read it thrice coz once just wasn’t enough.
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Awh, hi there ! This is a compliment of highest order. Thank you so much for reading and this comment.I’m humbled !😊😇❤️
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Wow this is stunning!
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Thank you so much !☺️😇
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You’re so welcome 😊
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Much appreciated 💞
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Wow Zee 🙂
This is purely wow 🙂
& I have to tell you this…
Reading after a long time, it really feels awesome !!
Btw, how are you.. Long time !!
🙂
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Hi, thanks a lot for reading, I’m so glad to see your name pop in my notification after a while. I’m happy you liked the post 🙂
I’m alright. What about you? Where have you been? 🙂
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And I am happy that you were happy seeing my name 🙂
I am good but a lil away from blogging.. Not a regular blogger, you know it 🙂 My grey matter gets crazy then..
So how are you and how is life taking you 🙂
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Yeah you have not been regular. But I’m glad you drop by whenever you feel like it and don’t disappear completely 🙂
Well life’s been crazy, ups and down and all. Let’s just say I’m taking it one step at a time and see where life takes me eventually 🙂
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Yes yes 🙂 you are some of my few virtual friends here whom I do pay a visit once in a while, to remind you guys that I am still hovering around 😀
And yes life is a mixture of all the up n downs, the goods n bad.. So take it slow 🙂 Be kind .. Smile lots..and stay blessed always my friend :))
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Thanks a lot for your support and kind wishes. I appreciate that a lot. I’m glad you drop by once In a while. I hope I get to see you around more often one of these days 😉
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The #moreoften clause is what I beg to differ.. 😀
and btw, yes I am trying to post more..
But nothing happening as such !!
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Hmmm I can understand. Well take it at your own pace, whichever makes you feel comfy 🙂
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Thank you my friend 🙂
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You’re welcome 😉
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I like that photo a lot.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Everything you write evokes so much emotion in me. From the first line I just knew this was going to be amazing and I was right !
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Awh thank you so much Jimi ! I’m glad my words can have that impact ☺️
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i need a chocolate bar…
i hv medical problem in reading content …
if u keep one line blank space after 4 lines it will help me reading better…
refer http://wp.me/p3dJz1-eM
regards
Your Well Wisher Program
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Oh thank you for the tip 🙂
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Beautiful visual Zee.. well done!! 🙂 ❤
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Thank you very much Courtney ☺️💜
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This is amazing Zee ,the analogy of hear with archeology is something so rare ,I haven’t seen it before.Superb
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Awh thank you very much dearest ! Heart is as resilient as any archeology site after all 😉
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Hahaha,thats so true Zee
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😂😜😆
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My oh my! The play on words, the imagery, the representations … Perfect! One of your many bests.
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Thank you Rommel for your generous words of appreciation😇
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You have a lovely way with words. Hope you have somebody in your life you feel this way about. If not, may you find them someday.
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Oh thank you so much! There was a time I hoped the same but now I feel this way about myself. Sometimes you have to be your own hero and be there for yourself so learning to do that 🙂
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Very nicely written, Zee. Your words resonate.
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Thank you so much for reading. I’m glad my words touched you😊😇
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OMG, this is pure greatness Zee!!! 🙂 ❤
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Awh thank you bunches Natalie !😘❤️
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My pleasure sweetness‼️❌⭕️
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Such positivity, Zee…like a phoenix from the ashes, your words have rejuvenated the innermost feelings and emotions. The quest to know the unknown and to tame the known…let the journey prevail… 🙂
A wonderful piece… ❤
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Your words themselves are such a perfect compliment to mine. Thank you so much Maniparna! It’s all about the journey, the ups and downs and finding the beauty in between. I loved your comment ! ❤️❤️
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Welcome and have a happy Sunday… 🙂 ❤
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Have a relaxing Sunday too! 🌺
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This was great!
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Hi, Thanks a lot ! 😇😊
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SMiLes.. my friEnd
Zee.. we stArt as
seeds.. as
gRains of
Sand
with
mountain
potential to
become love
as we love our selves
and others same.. the first
step is truly Loving God within
with all youR HeARt of EmoTiOns
and SeNses aS liGht iN Positivity..
tolerating and accepting
sAme God FeeLinG
dArk as not
so well..
changing
what we can
to liGht morE..
as nows go by..
as the grains become
sand as the water of Love
becomes silt.. same as original
name of God too as Lahmu and
Lahamn too.. as i always
have to refer to
a History
of God
on page
8 by Karen
Armstrong.. to
remember how to
spell those names that
oddly enough are like my
real last name too that is just
another name for land holder too..
in Feudal German way for the ‘owner’ as such..
too.. as sure.. just synchronicity and coincidence
too.. as spelled in reverse my name sounds a lot
like name hell too.. except it it ends in EL that way
that is another name for God too.. so sure..
perhaps i have an inside
line in
name
too.. hehe..
for liGht and truTh..
inborn as such as well
all do when we open our
heARts.. our MiNd and BoDy
BaLanCing SoUls wiTh SpiRit
riSinG hiGher in positivity of
EmoTioNs and SeNses too..
so do not be ashamed
for as you say
up there..
narcissism..
in self love way..
as the other side of that
is the timid soul who never
loves self or has the power of
self love to bring love up in the
empty grains of love that can
be the tunnel of
mountain
iN Love
of otHeRs too..
PoEtry and DancE and
SonG and aLL otHeR arTS
of heARt is how we grow
A muscle of Love.. wriTing
A SonG of YouR SoUL.. and
you my friEnd.. will help build other mountains
too.. where a heARt replaces.. for a way to love
out
of
a tunnel
of dArkness.. from Before..
in oTheR words.. my friEnd
Zee.. BeCoMe the Love you dREam
of.. BeCoMe the Lover you desire..
Be
Love..
Be Free..
Love ALL..
SinG and DancE Long..
A SonG oF liGht liFE.. mY FriEnd.. Zee..:)
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This is exactly what I going for with the poem to become the love I dream of and become the lover I desire. Well said Fred. Thanks a lot for reading and sharing your thoughts. Hope you have a nice day ahead!
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You
Will..:)
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Zee, this was amazing! That sounded as if you had given my feelings a voice. Wow! I am flabbergasted. Such deep words about giving someone the love they deserve so much after their hearts were broken over and over again. A wonderful feeling when you are the one who is meant to bring the sun back into the ruins of past days! Most beautiful, Zee!
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Oh wow, thank you so much Erika. Your words made me so happy. You said it all. That’s exactly what I was going for with this poem. To heal wounds of the past and being there when things seems to be too dark. Even if it’s you for yourself. No matter what has happened you are still deserving of love. The best kind 😊❤️
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Yes, Zee! Exactly!!! Everybody deserves the best. That also makes me think that nobody is born evil. We don’t know what made a person how they appear now. The ones who seem less deserving need the most love…. not always easy but to me it is a fact! What makes people become despressive or agressive is mostly a lack of love they feel for themselves!
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I agree with that completely Erika! I believe in the same, you know as they say “every evil demon that is down there was once an angel before it fell” so everybody is the way they are for a reason. They have a story, a background that we might not know of. So i believe in giving people a benefit of the doubt and not be judgemental for their choices 🙂
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Yes, and I believe this totally. We are all angels and nobody was born evil. I believe that some are serving for others ad the gad guy in order to teach them a lesson they chose to learn before they came down here. For us humans it is not explainable that we could choose terrible things. But from the view of the soul that wants experience and development it looks different. I even wrote my next Monday post about this!
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Oh wow this is such a insightful topic, I’ll pop up there to catch up to all your posts soon! ❤️
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Take your time, Zee! They are waiting for you whenever you find them 😊
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I also love the way you said “the ones who seem lease deserving need the most love” 😊
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That is one of the key lines in my next Monday post! I thank you for this post and the conversation, Zee! Very inspiring!
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Oh the pleasure was all mine, thanks for indulging me in such thoughtful conversations ! ❣️
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Always such an inspiration to chat with you, Zee 😊
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Feelings are mutual Erika ❤️
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Very much appreciated, Zee 💖
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❤️😘😇
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Oh my goodness! What beautiful lines – each and every one.
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Hi Sumyanna, thank you very much for your kind words 😇❤️
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I like the imagery!
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Thank you Marissa ! 🙂
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Absolutely beautiful. I am sure you are a fantastic archeologist of the heart, one who preserves and lovingly restores. My only complaint is that somebody should be saying this to you, somebody should offer to explore and restore your broken heart. Someone needs to caress the beautiful ruins and know the great soul behind them, bring you back to life 🙂
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I hate to admit this on a public platform but I’m done expecting anyone to write it for me. At some point the poet in me wished to be a poem. But since I’m a narcissist at the end of the day, I write for myself now. So this is for me! Yeah I wrote it for myself cuz nobody else will and I’m happy about it 🙂
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I am not surprised, it did sound too much like your broken heart 🙂 And don’t think there aren’t others out here who would write poems for or about you: You have shown over and over again how beautiful your heart is, even when it’s broken, so who wouldn’t want to see how much more it would shine when it is healthy? But indulge yourself, write your own poems for yourself. You are a great poet and deserve the words of a great poet.
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Well even if there are “others out there” who might write for me, let’s just say I’m not hoping anymore 😉 thank you so much for your kind words Trent, I’m humbled you see all of that in me. Now I am writing, I’m inspired by myself and it is quiet liberating if I do say so myself. I’m so happy to have a friend like you by my side who has nice things to say hehehe😁😉😇
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Just speaking the truth 🙂 Self-empowerment is fantastic, as is self-inspiration. I’m sure that you go forward in your medical studies full of confidence (if not, why not 😉 ), you need to do that in of all of your life’s pursuits. You are the one person you can rely on. And if you let yourself down? You just try harder next time! Oh, and me. You can rely on me 😉 hehehe 😀
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Haha oh nice to know you appointed yourself as that only one person I can rely on 😉 lol
And that’s the both best and worst part that I’m the only one person I can rely on and that I have to try harder each time I go down because there is no other option 🙂
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The one and only 😉 Hmmm, I guess I did word that wrong, didn’t I 😉 OK, how is this “Oh, and me. I can’t speak for anyone else in the Universe, but you can rely on me”? 😀 Learn and practice self reliance, but look around you on occasion 🙂
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Haha no it was absolutely fine Trent, I was just messing with ya. Both statements are very sweet☺️
Even though I hate self reliance but that’s always what I had done and have been doing. I’ve looked around and found nothing, I guess I’m not that lucky 😀
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My computer doesn’t like this comment. Every time I try to reply it crashes. Yes, I knew you were having fun at my expense. 😅😝😎 One good thing about my computer not working is that I can do this🏄😊 Maybe there are people here who you can rely on sitting with you and helping to pick up the pieces… 😊
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Haha such a cool comment for sure Trent. Well something good came out of your laptop crashing lol the emojis really add “spice to the life” if I do say so myself😂😁😜
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So I guess that there is only one way to respond.. 🎶🎺🎺🎹😉😂😂😎
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Haha yeah !😂😎🤗😈👻🙉
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😇😂😎
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This is the most amazing things we can do for ourselves Zee,I love the way you have written it for yourself .If we will not pick ouurseves who will ,if we will not realize how beautiful we are inspite of broken no one ever will and why to wait to become someone else’s poem when we can become our own poem .Cheers to the self love
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Hi thank you so much ! I’m glad their is someone else who understands where I’m coming from. This is what I’ve realised with time and you said it so well “if we will not pick ourselves who will” . You know when I look back, the only person who has been there for me through the toughest of times is myself. So why not cherish the self I’ve become. Why wait for someone else to define me when I can do it so perfectly myself ! Many cheers to self love and being empowered! 🙌🏻💪🏻❤️
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Yes zee because I have been there too and I am still there .Its just that ,I am happy for there now because It taught me to be on my own and once you realize you never beed anyone else ,you may want them but not need them.
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Oh God, that’s exactly how I feel now! You said it in words. I’ve learned the lesson. “You may want them but not need them” ! Preach preach !!🙏🏻
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Do check out my posts too,comment awaited 🙂 🙂
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Oh Yes I’ll definitely drop by ! 🙂
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“I’ll show you how beautiful your ruins are.” Beautiful. Not many other words to describe this, Zee. You are a poet of the highest order.
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Oh wow,I’m truly humbled Rob. Thank you very much !😊😇
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💗💗
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😇❤️
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