To think,
It’s alright, when it’s not
Is the worst thing to go through alone.
To think,
That everything will b alright,
Is a false hope.
To think,
Memories will fade,
Leave you alone and go away,
Is not going to happen
Just so you know.
To think
So many things,
Is not a blessing nor a cure
But a curse.
To think, To think, To think…
Create a path of Light with your Life
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Life at age 72, feeling like a 20 year old. You can do it too.
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This is short but beautiful Zee 🙂 I loved it.Love your blog’s new look.
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Hey Jess, Thanks a lot. I’m so glad this new look worked, I’m getting good feedback on it so far lets see if I can keep it this way or not ! 🙂
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This is a great poem, Zee. I for one like thinking, love thinking about ideas over and over in my head and trying to see different points of view. But you are so right. Thinking too much can be a curse. Sometimes if we keep thinking, we won’t have time or get the chance to do something
And as the other commenters have said, you sound sad. I hope you are okay. I love your header and the cartoon. Very simple message 🙂
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Hey Mabel, I agree thinking is crucial for us humans, that is what makes us unique, It was just the way I was feeling at the moment. I overthink things.. It causes so much hindrance. It’s frustrating !
And yes I’m doing much better now, Thank you for asking and such a nice comment ! I did need some feedback on the new look so thank you for that too 🙂
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Real. Unvarnished. I like this, Zee.
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Hey Thanks a bunch Tony 🙂
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Awesome poem. Thinking can be good but it can also be a very frustrating and dangerous thing. I find it really refreshing to find a post like this around. Keep it up. 🙂
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Hey Franz, Thank you very much for your compliment 🙂
You are right, I did focus on thinking’s more frustrating and dangerous aspect, That’s how I felt at the moment but ofcourse thinking is a crucial part of our being, which makes ‘Us’ us ! 🙂
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Yes it does….yes…it…does 🙂
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hugs to you my friend. I hope you feel better soon.
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Thanks and same to you. *hugs back* ❤
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Beautifully expressed!
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Thank you 🙂
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The first thing that came in my mind was the second line of this sher by Ghalib 🙂
“Yaad-e-Mazi Aazab Hai Ya Rab…
Cheen Lay Mujh Say Hafiza Mera………!!!”
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Wah wah aap to shaer niklay ! 😀
Kaya baat hay aapki 😛
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That’s too much thinking, Zee. Poem-wise, it’s a great subject. But the negative tone kind of drags. 🙂 But I see how we can’t always think positively all the time. We got to be realistic.
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“That’s too much thinking’ I absolutely agree ! I have to learn to stop doing that, It’s not good 😦 That is why this poem Rommel. Uugh I over-think stuff
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wow I like your new style Zee, thought provoking..!
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Thought provoking? How ironic ! 😛
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Eh 😀
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I love your new blog design!
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Thank you Mr.Professor 🙂
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Great new look!
And what you write – awesome.
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Hey Thank you so much. I really needed the feedback on this 🙂
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Do you call optimism as false hope?!
And just don’t try to forget, for you keep on remembering it!
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At the moment it seems like it and a part of me is aware it’s not true. But I can’t shake it.
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yea. it happens at times 🙂
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Hugs! If this is your state of mind right now. Sometimes I feel we think too much or maybe it’s just me 🙂
Finally caught up reading your posts for last week..hehehe.I took 4 or 5 days to complete one post and here you have written one every day 👏 for you girl!
And never stop thinking! Thinking makes us feel alive!
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Ohh it’s cuz you have a small boy to take care of all day long.Me? on the other hand have holidays and nothing to do all day long. So don’t feel bad. You are doing the best you could 🙂
Thank you so much for you uplifting words and taking time to read my previous posts too ❤
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Thinking is definitely a mixed blessing/curse for me, but I wouldn’t be a writer if I couldn’t think so I have to put up with the bad so the good can poke its head out occasionally.
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I think that too, All that I write is because of the way I am or how I think. I don’t want to lose it either but you know sometimes It gets really hard.
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This poem seems a little dark but I just won’t think about it and go through my day without clouds. In fact, I won’t think about anything that might disturb me. Nah, nah, nah, nah, I can’t hear you. No, seriously, I’m sorry if your mind is full of black thoughts. I hope I made you smile at least a little bit. We all have our dark thoughts and demons that haunt us. Sometimes it’s best to work though it on our own, sometimes we need that hand on our shoulder and the sympathetic words of “I understand”. I hope a virtual hand from half a world away helps.
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Haha, It made me smile a lot Trent not just little. Thank you, you always seem to lighten me up 🙂
You have no idea how much it helps to write here and have so many people around to lend a helping hand or kind words or two. Consider your virtual hand reached and much appreciated ❤
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To think it’s alright, when it’s not is indeed an awful thing to go through alone. It’s like suffering in silence. You seem very sad recently, Zee. I suggest a shiny new floor to brighten your day. 🙂
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Haha, You already brightened my day by suggesting a shiny new floor ! lol Thank you Rob ❤
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